21 April 2014 — bonus #haiku

washing the dishes
I flow with the river
I swim with the fish

drinking the water
I sip from the ocean
I drink in the world

eating dinner
I taste the sunlight
I sing the field songs

spending my days
I am the whole universe
I am just me

— This string of haiku was inspired by the haiku here.

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5 thoughts on “21 April 2014 — bonus #haiku

    • Not that I am aware of, but I have read much poetry and learned from many masters. How nice of you to say so…. I saw the original as being about being part of the universe, no separation, and so I wrote the first haiku and it didn’t feel finished–hence, the string.

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